The Baudelairean Sonnet - part IV
Sunday, April 9th, 2006
I have been working on Charles Baudelaire's "Don Juan aux enfers," Don Juan in Hell." I do not know if you are familiar with the story of the famous libertine? (speaking of libertines, have you seen the new Johnny Depp movie, The Libertine? It hasn't come out in the theaters yet here) … anyway, the plot, such as it is, centers around about a free-thinking Spanish noble, who seduces a woman, kills her father Don Luis and then insults the dead man's stone statue before finally being condemned to hellfire. Mozart's Don Giovanni is based on the myth. The original poem goes as follows:
Quand Don Juan descendit vers l'onde souterraine
Et lorsqu'il eut donné son obole à Charon,
Un sombre mendiant, l'oeil fier comme Antisthène,
D'un bras vengeur et fort saisit chaque aviron.Montrant leurs seins pendants et leurs robes ouvertes,
Des femmes se tordaient sous le noir firmament,
Et, comme un grand troupeau de victimes offertes,
Derrière lui traînaient un long mugissement.Sganarelle en riant lui réclamait ses gages,
Tandis que Don Luis avec un doigt tremblant
Montrait à tous les morts errant sur les rivages
Le fils audacieux qui railla son front blanc.Frissonnant sous son deuil, la chaste et maigre Elvire,
Près de l'époux perfide et qui fut son amant,
Semblait lui réclamer un suprême sourire
Où brillât la douceur de son premier serment.Tout droit dans son armure, un grand homme de pierre
Se tenait à la barre et coupait le flot noir;
Mais le calme héros, courbé sur sa rapière,
Regardait le sillage et ne daignait rien voir.
The poem isn't a real sonnet and there were a few term Baudelaire used I had to look up. Antisthenes was a Greek philosopher who invented cynicism. Also, Charon, in Greek mythology, is the ferryman of the dead. He rows his boat across the river Styx in the underworld. The dead would pay their passage in his boat with a coin called an oboli, but that was too hard to rhyme so I called it a death coin instead. And Sganarelle is Don Juan's manservant or valet.
When Don Juan reached that underground river,
he paid his death coin passage from those shores.
Charon, gruff in Antisthenes' manner,
then pulled with vengeful arms on his long oars.Their breasts sagging in unlaced gowns, a crowd
of grim women, herded under black sky,
made, as they cried, bestial noises, loud,
urgent, like doomed sacrifice led to die.Sganarelle, laughing, called for his wage
while in among the vast dead assembled there
old Don Luis pointed with shaking rage
the son who dared once to mock his white hair.Elvira, chaste and thin, shuddering while
standing near her false husband, her wed grief,
tried to ask for one final, parting smile
of his first love for her, both bright and brief.And the statue of the man carved from stone
stood at the helm, steering. The Don, staring
absently at the waves, calm and alone,
leaned on his sword, ignoring everything.