Archive for October, 2006

plight of the kitchen poet

Saturday, October 28th, 2006


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Maybe because my diet is mainly cheese and more cheese food does not play very highly into my poetry. I know some poets who write whole books about food; odes to soups and ham and eggs and whatnot. This is a photo of my kitchen. What's wrong with it?

No cheese in sight! Where's the munster? There should be a poem about munster somewhere …

Now, I thought the world lacked poems about cheese and was going to write something until I found this link, a whole webpage devoted to cheese poetry! I will let you judge for yourself the quality of the poems. I will leave you with a sample from Anthony Karalian and his poem "Old School Cheese." As Dave Berry would say, I swear, I am not making this up:

Yo, Yo, cheese is as fine as my fro.
I'll always want to eat it, even when I grow.
Cheese is a desire, I've gotta have some.
People that are really mean, must really lack some.
Cheese is Old School fun,
You can even stick it in a burger bun.
If you wanna try some, come to my pad, you're welcome.
Oh please, oh please, won't you just try some?
Polly want a cracker? NO! Polly wants some cheese.
Is that Green Eggs and ham? WRONG. That's a bunch of cottage cheese.
You must remember my motto.
Cheese is a power that you can't control, it will take you over, and make you an addict.
AHH, The power of cheese!

because it’s the habit of poets to put homeless people in their poems to show how supersensitive they are/ if you won’t let them into your pocketbook at least let them into your verse

Saturday, October 28th, 2006


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Another Richard Peel bit of free clipart

I love hobos. Especially sad hobos with little sticks carrying all their worldly belongings in a handkerchief. If they have a cigar stub and big floppy shoes that is even better. But there aren't a lot of poets in this day and age who put hobos into their poems. I pick up a book at random and read, "I am not who I was or who I will be here on this street that is also a floating world that I am trying to climb" — and I throw the book across the room because what does that mean and why bother continuing? Then I look at the back cover with the author photo and bio and sob into my Wheaties.

Just once, instead of the compulsive list of publications none of us care about I'd love to see "20 to Life" and "Sing Sing" in the same sentence after a poet's name. Or "Once Blacklisted by U.S. Government for Jihad Sympathies" instead of "lives in Brooklyn with husband and child, poetry editor of the New York Times." Or "In the '70s John Shaft was a Bad Mother — shut your mouth!" But he can dig it and all the poems in the book are in jive: I's gots'ta be not who ah' wuz o' who ah' gots'ta be here on da street dat be also some floatin' wo'ld da ah' am tryin' t'climb. And the whole world says damn and keeps on reading.

I wouldn't even care if there wasn't a single hobo in the book. It would be a pleasure to read.

We drove down West Street to MLK South
(which is technically impossible but
I am lousy with directions) badmouth
at a bad wheel. But that's not a portrait,
no. Let my portrait, my snapshot, be smut
for the literate and funny. Isn't
that why you are here? to hear a somewhat
rude joke? to show you how omnipresent
I am? Now I should say something urgent
about driving, like: "OhMaGod! We Are
Going To Die!"
Which isn't that pleasant,
I know, but true. Just like you, me, this car,
the sad hobo we passed at the Quik-E
Mart. All of us going in for coffee.

the dead

Wednesday, October 25th, 2006

There are many days I worry about the dead. All our ideas of death usually center around the dead not having a lot of fun. What was it Woody Allen said about death? I am not afraid of death, I just don't want to be there when it happens. But how do we know? But how do we know anything?

I love cafes! "I'd only cheat on you
with the dead."
Where else could I overhear
that but here? Who wouldn't want the dead? Who
doesn't feel sorry for them now? Like we're
so sure, we know. We know and we all sneer
and scoff at the dead. No sex! No passion!
They just watch us. Endlessly! Death makes mere
voyeurs of us all … unless … everyone
dead has so much wild hoopla, corporal fun,
cheap thrills, that they can't be bothered with us.
We, the Whining — I mean, Living — who shun
the dead. We who cannot even discuss
love or what happens next without making
things up. We who claim to love everything.

red noir

Wednesday, October 25th, 2006

There will always be a backlash against the edgy, the extreme, the revolutionary. Right now the academic canon can't get enough of stream of consciousness, free verse, genderless, anti-political poets. If a poem like Ginsberg's Howl did anything, it gave permission for rambling, theory-based, abstract conceptionalism to become the dominate form of today's poetry.

More often than not poets that seek to find place in both race and identity go missing from many of the mainstream publications and discussions one finds in libraries and bookshops. This is both a disservice to these poets and to the continual discourse of poetry in America. To be able to talk with any authority on any issue is rare. When one finds a poet who can combine race, gender and history — and let them sing together — that poet should be championed by those of us who do not have those gifts or skills.

Wanda Coleman is such a poet. Her book, Ostinato Vamps (Univ. of Pitssburgh Press, 2003) should be on everyone's Top 10 books to read.

The first section of the book, Red Noir (which is based on a collage by Austin Strauss) has more complexities in twenty-five than most mature poets deal with in their whole careers. Wanda Coleman is a Los Angeles based poet and while the tone of the poems feels as if a Raymond Chandler novel was going off in the background their themes are anchored in our nation's links with slavery and of our refusal to acknowledge such crimes.

These are not easy poems to read. They are violent in the way a fire storm is violent. They are angry in the way a hurricane is angry. But they are a power, a truth of a world where women (and men) are commodities, their bodies used and abused and beyond their powers to control. It is interesting that even though slavery flourishes around the world today there are few poets who speak about it in present tense, only safely in past tense. Wanda Coleman brings everything into the NOW and the reader will be rewarded to be in the presence of such a force.

The section starts with the poem Revenants, where the body of a Black woman becomes the metaphoric land and both wait for "the dark gnarled word" of "deliverance" (3) that never comes to their rescue. Yellow Parchment places us squarely at "the guarded gates of slave quarters/ inscribed with delusions of freedom …" The poem addresses many of us, the living, who have the freedom to look the other way as "millions vanish/ from the text of the telling" and our histories are rewrote, reshaped, resold "to fit the narrow imprint/ of plunderers and exploiters …" (4) who now have control over our narratives.

In a poem like Relocation on the Edge a slave master " is listening" … "at our keyhole/ to our heated sex" in this " city of shames" (6) For Coleman the "plunderers and exploiters" are men, to be sure, but they are men of every different shade and race. And the exploited are not always those who go about their time innocently but many of us caught in deep cravings and addictions; a reminder that there is more than one form of slavery. In 78 rpms on a Piper's Dream she states "freedom is a blurred state of vision …" combined with "the ritual of escaping the lash/ of recognition –" (7). Who Coleman addresses over and over again in her poems are the anonymous survivors of life, the "legendary women" who are "working nightshifts and making change/ under the spell of knuckles" (13) from Thirty Seconds over America. Coleman weaves spirituality, sexuality and history in and out of her words; but a subtle determinism to her stories. Bad Luck in one sort or another shadows these poems. Even in "The Garden [of Eden]" we are told Coleman and her lover are left to "rake leaves" (17). The darkest of these poems is Red Eye & Black Beans where the narration slips into the hallucinations of nightmare. Rapists attack a woman, "the red tongues lickin' the black off her" combined with "the fresh smells of cut mango and too-ripe banana" (23). Eden is rotting.

While violence is always present in Red Noir so is hope; "there's a rainbow over Ararat/ painted in sunny yellows and aquamarines" (13). Here Mount Ararat, the biblical mountain Noah landed the Ark on a led his people to freedom, is held out as a similar promise to Coleman's readers. The key is surviving. Hope, promise, freedom, the "it" she addresses is available to all. She ends the section with Los Angeles Nocturne:

(you too can touch it. as much
as you want
you too can taste it. as much
as you want

there is everything to feel. there. throbbings
in your palms like my heart) (25)

This is just one of four sections, each worthy of our attention. Wanda Coleman is one of rare gifts: a poet who fire and power and the ability to sing that fire into song. Neruda could do that. Who else? Hardly anyone in America even tries to speak on the issues she does and with embarrassing results most of the time. The argument identity poetics, form, the subjects that the current middle-class poets frown on are that such things as identity supersede the song, in other words the poems are poor quality. That is just as true as any argument against any poem; no one wants to listen to bad poems. But there are just ass many rambling, theory-based, abstract poems being written today as poems that speak of our shared stories and histories. Perhaps if poets focused on their craft instead of just reacting against superficial complaints they would craft poems as power and beautiful as Coleman's. Possibly. But perhaps that is why there is only one Wanda Coleman.

need

Tuesday, October 24th, 2006


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photo of A.M.Smith (Triple Goddess Publishing, 2006)

I have been reading The Poetic Essence of AngelaMichelle, by Angela M. Smith (Triple Goddess Publications, 2006). I am curious how other poets deal with "need." I use this in the broadest way possible, since right now I need sleep … but I have needed a good night rest for years. Working as night nurse helped cover up my difficult and restless nights but still 3 to 4 hours a night of rest hasn't exactly helped me. Here is Angela M. Smith's poem dealing with the subject of destiny (which is sort of like need on many levels):

Time and tide

Wait for no man
You either live your dreams
Or regret the memories
Of letting that ship sail
The clock does not stop
For you to live that moment
Over
There is no instant replay
So make haste
Not waste
And fulfill your destiny. (page 13)

I like that a lot. Her poetry reminds me of L.A. poet Wanda Coleman. In "Baptism" Coleman writes: "this is the place in the music where/ the soloist steps up to the mike/ and obsesses over an ear/ and the couches and tables catch fire …" (Ostinato Vamps, 104) Both Smith and Coleman have a certainty about their work, a feeling of knowing exactly what they want and how to get it. Even if it feels impossible on certain levels. Perhaps that is what makes this powerful poets. The ability to own their needs. I hope one day to be able to do that too. One day.

ai! ai! is an exclamation. ai! love!
is a joke, love + pain. last night you filled
the whole room. I envy deep sleep above
all else you are a deep sleeper. I'm skilled
too, at certain things. But if you distilled
those things down, cricket, what good are they? Sleep
is a skill. Dreaming a greed. I have willed
myself still but not even greed will keep
company with me. Only nightmares creep
inside. I ask for so little and get
it. Ai! love! is a joke. Deep love + deep
pain keeps me awake. Let there be greed. Let
me ask for greed. Greed. Greed I have forgot
to ask for. Ask. I cannot — I cannot —